Remorse (englisch)

[Starsurfer]

As often as I’m so foolish

I’m backed up by you

I hope to see you soonish

It’s so much you get me through

 

I know you’re a man of reliability

And that’s what I treasure

So I assume liability

For all that I messed up

 

You are my heart and in my soul

So please forgive me being a fool <33

[Lily]

Hi Starsurfer,

 

I like the statement of your poem - unfortunately your English is not adequate ...

You could probably rhyme much better in your mother tongue!

 

I tried my hand as follows:

 

Whenever I feel like a fool

I am backed up by you

you always have a tool

by which to get me through

 

I know I can always rely

on you and your goodwill

however, I will try

to meet you up the hill

 

You are my heart, you are my soul

please forgive me for being a fool