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[Hase]

i thought
we were only beginning 
and the dream was still to be lived
until you said
we had ended
when?
 
i gave us all the time in the world
and let the words wait on my tongue 
believing their time was yet to come
but you said
our time was up
before i had even understood what it was
that was over
 
all we have ever been
is a possibility 
a question that will never be answered 
a thought passing the universe's mind 
 
you need to say
i love you 
while there's still time
but also
these words should never be wasted 
you should never say them
unless you mean it
 
so when
is the time to say
i love you?
 
 
 
 
- Hase, 20. August 2023
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 
 

 

[Donna]

Liebe @Hase,
Wunderbar!
Meine Lieblingsstellen:

 


 


"i gave us all the time in the world


and let the words wait on my tongue 


believing their time was yet to come"


 


 


"all we have ever been


is a possibility 


a question that will never be answered 


a thought passing the universe's mind "


 


 


 


 


 


 


 


 


 


 


 


 

Liebe Grüße, Donna