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[Donna]

When the day changed to the color of stained rain 
Our breath wept though love beat in every vein  
Eclipsed Souls divided, housed in chained disdain 
Not seeing past hurts and each other's pain 
 
Anger knows no forgiveness, dredging up blame 
I thought we were solid instead pride makes vain 
Neither closes the gap, this is insane 
Standing far apart; beneath us crumbling terrain 
 
Suspended seconds freeze, only I remain 
 
You abruptly turn ....... leave and don't explain  
Walking towards a new Spring your heart can rename  
In your wake, a cold shadowy membrane 
Abandoned, I shiver in Winter's refrain 
©Donna H.
April 11, 2023

 

[Uschi R.]

Ach liebe Donna,

wenn wir nur immer so könnten wie wir wollten, unseren Gefühlen einfach ihren freien Lauf zu lassen...

Herzlich liebe Grüße zu dir!
Uschi