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[Donna]

A curtain of snowflakes drifts 
The night sifts filigree snow 
Where does the homesick heart go? 
 
Lattice frost glitters on asphalt 
I breathe in cold air and halt 
 
Wind rushes through treetops 
Snow softly plops 
 
This Winter Wonderland, ice castle dream 
I exhale thankfulness, puffing steam 
 
Heart thudding
Serenity budding
 
Stamp.........stamp ........
stamp my feet 
Catch the rhythm of Winter's beat 
 
Feel the flow of blood surging
to face and ears 
A trickle of tears jeers, all those lost years 
 
Acrid, burning frozen skies 
The sadness of a hundred goodbyes
 
There isn't anything to criticize
I watch as time stands still yet flies
 
Your love,
here,
I recognize 
©Donna H.
January 26, 2023

 

[Donna]

Lieber @Herbert Kaiser,
Ich werkelte und änderte dieses Gedicht mindestens zehnmal bis ich zu diesem Ergebnis kam.
Freut mich dass es bei dir gut angekommen ist.
Liebe Grüße,
Donna