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I don't know what's wrong with me,
it's like my brain is settled free.
But all in all it seems like i am caught
in a habit like more often than not.
 
It's the same scheme as always,
i fall into love
this feeling is ausumn
but i have to get rid of.
 
it's like a shackle around my mind
i hate it, it's like i am fully blind
my thoughts are captured in a possessive way
but I have this feeling i have to stay
 
my negative experiences passed away
but still have the habit to flee and don't stay
it's hard work to hide this deeper thought
and i know after this there is just the naught
 
but eventually there's a new way to take
i now have to make this changing break
will let my rules now leave behind
and make used this way of feeling blind
 
I'm ready to take on this risky run
cause there's a sentence which says no risk no fun
trying different ways to get comfortable with this
eventually there are some freedoms i will miss
 
my time is to restricted to make rough decisions
so i take this way without my mind permissions
if the plan goes wrong, outgoing with violation
please, if there is a god, take me to your final station
 
I'm afraid of being injured again,
so i normally take the safety plan
but i don't want to stay alone forever
so i take this risk and make my endeavor
 
i hope I've evaluated this man well enough
and don't get again such a guy which is rough
but when this event takes place again
i will definitely take the heaven train
 
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Please don't take the heaven train
It make sence no pain no gain
A bit of both wird doch nicht schaden
 
Wollt ich dir mal eben sagen!
 
Liebe Grüße nach Daheim
Der nächste Kerl wird besser sein!
 
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Danke für deine "Kritik" wenn man es so benennen möchte
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Sollte kein Schmähgedicht über Männer sein, nur eines über diffuse geistige Vorgänge, die heißen glaube ich "Gefühle" oder so.
 
Deinen Absatz übernehme ich copyright-verdächtig gerne in meine neuen Gedichtspeibereien wenn okai?!
 
Schöne Grüße nach Planet Erde (kommt immer an)
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