Feedback jeder Art Sensuous Summer

[Donna]

Lazy, hazy hot days.
Lay languidly sensuous amidst awakenings, unfurling a myriad of ways.
Their swollen, rollin' humid, sticky desire seeks top notch face up, face down homecoming.
 
To lean in heavy front side, flip and lick dripping sweat backside, start the heart humming.
Caress, find access, lunge-plunge and lubricate caves that serve dank shade.
 
Splayed wide open bodies sway, cicadas shake flamboyant macaras, gilded by sunsets fueling passions braid.
Reeking vortexes touting brine, churned seaweed, froth, a hint of sweet musk, search-surfing lingering affirmation.
 
Ever lift, rise high, keep it there,
hold-hold-hold, shuddering waves let them tumble; take weighing accusation.
Bursting, several ripples, pitching forward,
thirsting, tousled hair, cursed to want more.
 
Liberated, red cheeked running on fiery sand carefree, bang-versed how to soft-core soar.
Summer's slippery sloped summary, so early commits before longing and memory.
Heat waves shimmy, wrap in tango tight dizzy lust, skinny dipping meandering waters, dousing with cool-down reverie.
©Donna H.
July 1, 2022

 

[Karo]

Starke Beschreibungskraft, liebe Donna.
Du hast den Sommer aufgefangen, wie er einen bleibenden Eindruck hinterlassen wird.
Heiß, echt heiß. Gut gelungen 🙂))
 
mfG.: Ference