Feedback jeder Art Spring switches with Summer

[Donna]

Cloying scent of sweet honeysuckle wafts.
Heat shimmies in tiny waves.
My sandals slap hot pavement.
Humidity slows down movement.
 
Temperatures ramp.
A heat wave has set up camp.
Light pink cap barely shades face.
I keep walking, gotta find a cool place.
 
Stand beneath a huge Maple.
This is not May's staple.
Our Spring yanked.
Climate change pranked.
 
Sweat oozes from every pore.
Wishing myself at the shore.
Now a flaming sun whips.
I chug a few warm sips.
 
Bottled water heat-infused.
Tastes like a million bucks imbued.
Hydration is key.
Leaning back, silently thank my friend the tree.
 
Large fanning leaf canopy.
Affords shelter.
Today's a real torcher-scorcher-melter.
Spring's hottest blockbuster.
©Donna H.
May 21, 2022

 

[Carlos]

Tja, eine Hitzewelle macht dir zu schaffen, liebe Donna.
Offensichtlich bist du eine echte Dichterin und hast die Lyrik im Blut, denn du dichtest trotzdem. 
Grüß mir deinen Freund, der freundliche Baum. 
Liebe Grüße 
Carlos

 

[Donna]

Lieber @Carlos,
Danke für die Blumen....
Der freundliche Baum grüßt zurück.
Er is sogar fülliger geworden.
Liebe Grüße, Donna