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Pondering
Sitting at a pond
there is a man, deep in thoughts
his skin made of stone
 
Fulfilment 
The final drop falls
Onto the skin of a lake
Making it complete

Hope
Through a tiny crack
On a Grey street, a flower
Proudly lifts its head

The earth
A fountain of life
Surrounded by the endless
echo of silence

Life recall
My head plummets down
Onto the concrete, and dives
Deep into the past
 
Sweet memory
I think of our kiss
A taste as sweet as sugar 
Always on my tongue