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[Hase]

II
You put me into your summer
Where soft winds were blowing
And days dawned unwritten
You were the peace I never had inside me
And with your curly brown hair
Your childlike eyes and noble manner
I found in you my guardian angel
And only soul I ever dared
To tell the truth to.
 
 
Will you in ten years remember
The day that I receive every year
With open arms from which the tears
Are dripping as I am tripping
Over everything that comes my way
The 16th of January it was
When we were ever-glad
Just lingering on each other’s faces.
 
I loved the silence that bore thousands of words
And the bliss of not yet taking the hand that was offered
For nothing’s more precious than the time before love
Before surrender
When nothing’s given, nothing taken
Nothing’s lost and nothing gained
Nothing’s promised, nothing broken
And nothing spoken
That is meant to remain unspoken
And every secret lingers peacefully in its realm.

 

[Donna]

Liebe @Hase,
Beautifully written! 
Tender and full of longing and love.
To know love's privilege is to live heaven on earth. 
Deine Zeilen sind melodisch und sehr schön geschrieben. Voller Zärtlichkeit und Sehnsucht.  Den Zauber der Liebe gut eingefangen, besonders bevor man sein Herz vergibt, diese verwundbare Zeit, ein Schwebe- Zustand der unberührt bleibt, ohne Erwartungen, vollkommen in seiner Reinheit.
Grossartige Poesie!
Liebe Grüße, Donna